Daniel asked the girl if she wanted to eat lunch with him at mcdonalds. The girl said that she wasn't doing anything today so she can eat with him. Daniel said see you at 03.00 am.
Daniel and Ben met at Mcdonalds an hour before Daniel were supposed to eat with the girl. They talked about how they would trick the girl. They decided to switch so Ben would eat with the girl.
When the girl arrived she looked for Daniel and he sat down in Mcdonalds waiting for her but what she didn’t know was that it wasn’t Daniel it was Ben. The girl sat down with Ben so they could order there food. When they started to eat the girl saw Bens scar and she screamed so loud you could hear all over Europe, she screamed that she never wanted to see him again and that she hated them.
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