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fredag 25 november 2011

Ghost story

Ghost story
Me and my friend Bob were alone in my granddads house, while he was away during the weekend. We weren’t so old when this happened but I can still remember those glowing red eyes.
We just came to his house, when my granddad was leaving for his short vacation, he looked like he was running from something. When we opened the door it gave away a small creeking noise. We went inside and unpacked our things, then we sat down and watched tv.
We were walking to the kitchen and at the end of the hallway I think I saw the shape of something but I just couldn’t figure out what. I don’t think Bob had seen it so I just ignored it. We got to the kitchen and made some sandwiches then we went back to the tv. Again I saw that shape of something at the end of the hallway.
When we had finished eating I told Bob about the thing I saw in the hallway and he said that we should go check it out. When we walked in the long hallway I heard some noises and so did Bob. It sounded like a dying pig. At the end of the hallway you could still see the shape, but as we got closer and closer to it  got scarier and scarier.
We stopped and thought for a while if we should really do this, both of us were really scared but we just had to do it. We got to the end of the hallway and there it was a dead rotten pig, but something was wrong it was moving. We ran back to the living room, screaming, and then we jumped into our beds that we had put up by the tv.
The next day we were still really scared, so we took some of my granddads golfclubs as defence, and then we went down to make breakfast. As we went to watch tv we saw it, it was the rotten pig and it was there just looking at us but it didn’t do anything. We threw our golfclubs on it and ran upstairs. We knew that we had to do something so we took some new golfclubs then we went downstairs. When we were downstairs we saw that it was just laying face down on the floor. When we started to walk to it slowly we saw that it wasn’t moving at all. I took my golfclub and tried to hit it but I couldn’t because it got stuck in the pig. The pig was sleeping and we had woken it up. It looked really mad with its glowing red eyes.
We ran as fast as we could to the door. Outside we saw my granddad and then we told him about the zombie pig and he started laughing. He said that it was just grandma that was in a suit, she had tricked us the whole weekend. That was why nothing happened during nighttime.
Sincerely Me and Bob  1994-01/04

2 kommentarer:

  1. The grandparents should get som kind of unpleasant trick played on them as well, don't you think? You have written a story using many different words, this makes it even more pleasant to read. The twist at the end created even more thoughts to me as a reader.

    SvaraRadera
  2. Mål: Göra skräckhistorier mer skrämmande.
    Jag är nöjd med att den blev som jag tänkte och att jag inte behövde ändra hur jag tänkte.
    Nästa gång kan jag försöka göra den mer läskig.

    SvaraRadera