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fredag 13 januari 2012

Goldilocks summary

Goldilocks was a little girl with golden locks that liked to go out in the woods alone. One day when she was in the woods she found a house. Goldilocks was hungry and tired so she looked in through the window to see if anyone was home. ’Is anyone there?’ she called out, but nobody answered.

She went inside and saw three bowls of porridge. She started to eat out of the big bowl but it was too hot, so she started at the smaller bowl but it was too cold. She tried eating out of the smallest bowl and it was just perfect so she ate it all.

Goldilocks was still tired so she went to the beds. She climbed up on the big bed but it was too big so she tried the smaller bed but it was too soft so then she tried the smallest bed and it was so comfortable that she fell asleep immediately.

The bears had been out walking when they waited for their porridge too cool down and when they returned home they saw that someone had been eating their porridge and been i  their beds. Baby bear said that someone still was in his bed. Goldilocks waked up and she was so scared of the three bears looking at her that she ran all the way home.

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